Black Gold the Novel

[CaptnZ]

First I'd like to say thanks to those of you that helped me, what, five years ago when I had a lot of questions about cave diving for a screenplay I was working on. Well, the screenplay didn't get written...but the novel did and I'm in the process of final editing before shipping it off to a publisher.
I have a blog site now and still need input into the book.
I will be posting some scenes and chapters in my blog (if I can figure out how) and would love some input from real cave divers as I don't have that badge yet.
Here's the blog site.

http://blackgoldnovel.blogspot.com/2010/01/welcome.html

Thanks to all for the previous input and I hope to get more response as I put out what I can.

[CaptnZ]

For those interested, I have posted the Prologue to my cave diving novel Black Gold on my website writingunderwater.com

This is the long version of 12 pages which I am cutting to 3...not an easy task, but necessary.

[CaptnZ]

Hi all,
I'm finishing the final polish on a cave diving novel set in the Tallahassee area and am looking for some honest input.
Anyone interested in reading it can access it at my blog site - writingunderwater.com.
or open the attached files.
I currently have two files attached, the prologue and Chapter 1. The dive scenes begin in Chapter 2 which I hope to have up very soon.
Appreciate any input.
DeWayne helped in it's inception, but has disappeared off my radar.

Thanks,
Brian Thometz

[FLDVR]

Hooked me Brian, now I'll have to read the rest!
Henry

[FW]

....DeWayne helped in it's inception, but has disappeared off my radar....

DeWayne had to quit diving for health reasons. He still logs in occasionally. The Wakulla Dive Club is around Tallahassee, maybe they could help.

[CaptnZ]

Anybody have a contact for him? Need to get ahold of him if I can.

[Slüdge]

I just PMed you the two e-mail addresses I have for him - one on his Facebook info page and one on file here.

[CaptnZ]

Here's the next Chapter of Black Gold

http://www.fileswap.com/share/d912ef...pter2.pdf.html

[cwick]

Keep it coming!
How much are they charging the Church?

[CaptnZ]

That's in Chapter 3...