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Herbie
10-30-2004, 10:36 AM
If any would care to respond with any positive/negative criticism/feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Parts I and II are on the front page but for part III you must click on the Star Pages link.Thanks. :wink:
DeWayne
10-30-2004, 10:39 AM
If any would care to respond with any positive/negative criticism/feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Parts I and II are on the front page but for part III you must click on the Star Pages link.Thanks. :wink:

You're a new age Hemmingway bro 8)
wingman
10-30-2004, 05:49 PM
If any would care to respond with any positive/negative criticism/feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Parts I and II are on the front page but for part III you must click on the Star Pages link.Thanks. :wink:

Nice story so far herbie...i wnat to read where that new cave goes....sounds like jt is going to scoop some booty....and rob is poised for a recovery dive at the mine. Looks like you got a novel on the way! Bill.
Bobby
11-01-2004, 10:27 AM
You have a flair for writing, I am always wanting more when I get to the end. If anything I would have to say that it would be nice to see the story progress in shorter time. I know this is a side thing but I want to know what is happening to the characters. :D
Sid
11-01-2004, 11:39 AM
Yep, I had to go clean up the some seepage after that one, cave diving, sex, and violence... thinking about Marianna again 3rd weekend in Nov wink wink wink. Sid
Gary
11-01-2004, 11:43 AM
Yep, I had to go clean up the some seepage after that one, cave diving, sex, and violence... thinking about Marianna again 3rd weekend in Nov wink wink wink. Sid

And I noticed you were imortalized after molesting that clown. (I'm assuming there is only one "Sid".)

Quite an honor.
Sid
11-01-2004, 12:43 PM
Yep, I had to go clean up the some seepage after that one, cave diving, sex, and violence... thinking about Marianna again 3rd weekend in Nov wink wink wink. Sid

And I noticed you were imortalized after molesting that clown. (I'm assuming there is only one "Sid".)

Quite an honor.

Yeah, now if Herbie will actually show me where that clown is cause you know you can't make that up, there gotta be a real clown cave somewhere, I got "K" a raggedy anne wig and this red foam nose and she called me a freak when I suggested some bozo funland playtime-sensitive touchy touchy, OK gotta run to the coustume store, need a tiara (guess I'll never learn). Sid
REastman
11-01-2004, 01:12 PM
If any would care to respond with any positive/negative criticism/feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Parts I and II are on the front page but for part III you must click on the Star Pages link.Thanks. :wink:

I liked it and would enjoy reading some more.
Bobby
11-01-2004, 03:10 PM
Yep, I had to go clean up the some seepage after that one, cave diving, sex, and violence... thinking about Marianna again 3rd weekend in Nov wink wink wink. Sid

And I noticed you were imortalized after molesting that clown. (I'm assuming there is only one "Sid".)

Quite an honor.

God help us if there is another one, lock your doors and windows, hide all of your sheep, and get hats with mirrors to protect your back side. :-D